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The Pilgrim’s Progress – John Bunyan

After I finished Little Women, I couldn’t help but pick up John Bunyan’s The Pilgrim’s Progress. It was Louisa May Alcott’s father’s favourite book; he would read it aloud to his children, and encourage them to act it out, so it’s no surprise that she referenced it a lot in her work. Plus, its influence is clear in literature more generally: most notably, William Thackeray’s Vanity Fair is named for one of its settings. It also crops up in The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, The Scarlet Letter, Jane Eyre, The Grapes of Wrath, and a bunch of others. The Pilgrim’s Progress is one of the most significant works of English literature, widely billed as being the first English novel. It has been translated into over 200 languages, and it has never been out of print. So, are you convinced? I am!

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The book’s full name is The Pilgrim’s Progress from This World, to That Which Is To Come. Bunyan began work on it while he was in the pokey; he was imprisoned for violating the Conventicle Act, which forbade people from gathering for religious services outside the Church of England in the 17th century. Bunyan, of course, did not give a shit, and he got busted preaching in a field. The first edition was published in 1678, while he was still locked up, and then the expanded edition came out after he was freed, in 1679. All up, there were twelve editions published in his lifetime, each with new revisions. This version, the Penguin English Library Edition, reproduces the original as closely as possible, with just a few slight tweaks to spelling and punctuation for the comfort of the contemporary reader.

It reads like a part-poem, part-play, part-story. The narrator recounts a dream that he had in jail about a pilgrim – Christian – who abandons his wife and children to hike to Heaven. Well, as best I can tell, he read the Bible and he freaked the fuck out (don’t all good pilgrimage stories start that way?). He’s weighed down by a “great burden” – the knowledge of his “sin” – and he convinces himself he’ll sink on down to Hell if he doesn’t get his shit together. So, off he goes!

Then there’s a second part about his wife and children following him, which I thought was kind of nice. If only all authors had dedicated sequels to the forgotten wife!

Bunyan’s allegorical tale, the academics say, stands out above his predecessors because his language was simple and straightforward, making it easier for the every-man to understand. To put it more simply, it’s The Divine Comedy for dummies. Dante’s work, and the similarities between them, are so obvious it’s like a brick hitting you over the head. Bunyan’s prose is a lot simpler to be sure, but in my mind Inferno is still the clear winner – if nothing else, it’s a lot more exciting. Plus, The Pilgrim’s Progress just isn’t very funny! The only laughs I got were from things that probably weren’t meant to be funny, like:

“She is a bold and impudent slut; she will talk with any man.”

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Talk! Imagine! What a strumpet!

There are no chapters in this edition (or any other, as far as I can tell), which is annoying – it’s just one big block of text. Normally, I use those pauses in the narrative to scribble down my notes, and think over what I’ve just read. Putting the book down to do all that, without a chapter break, feels like interrupting someone in the middle of a monologue. I suppose it’s forgivable, being that it was the first English language novel in history and no one had told Bunyan about chapters and all, but still… ugh.

At least it doesn’t require much background knowledge of religion. And all of the characters have helpfully-descriptive names like “Faithful” and “Talkative” – makes it pretty easy to keep them all straight. And Bunyan wasn’t entirely without humour in this regard; he was a Protestant, and not all that fussed on the Catholic Church, so he named the decrepit and harmless giant character “Pope”. Ha!

It’s impossible to deny Bunyan’s impact on English literature, and the respect afforded to him as a result of that. No one dares hanging any shit on him for using the “it was all a dream” trope – I mean, he’s probably the reason that trope exists to begin with! That said, I would only recommend The Pilgrim’s Progress to people who read the footnotes. You need to have a deep abiding curiosity about the tradition of literature, and/or God, to get much of it. If that doesn’t sound like you, give Dante’s Inferno a go instead, or skip the centuries-old religious allegories altogether.

My favourite Amazon reviews of The Pilgrim’s Progress:

  • “Strange print style… great literature thouh. But the way it’s presented on paper is like a kids big coloring book. It’s like a picture book, but they forgot to add the pictures.” – orson orson
  • “The quality of the book exceeded my expectations.” Patricia M Nulf
  • “This book is about as far away from biblical salvation as you can be. The main character had to work for his salvation which is not what the bible teaches. John 6:47, Romans 4:5, Eph 2:8-9If you wish to confuse someone and see your friend or relative in hell, get them this book.” – Dave Nesbitt
  • “Tedious” – Amazon Customer9
  • “Like the names of the people.” – Amazon Customer
  • “this book has you lookin at your faith” – Debra Carroll
  • “This was a gift for my husband. I have not heard comments from him.” – SLC


  1. Very natural follow-up to Little Women. Do you plan to read Little Men or Jo’s Boys?

    • ShereeKUWTP

      January 15, 2019 at 1:40 PM

      Yep! I love finding connections between these books and reading them back to back. Hope to get to Jo’s Boys someday, but have to truck on through the rest of The List first! 😉❤️

  2. I have been meaning to read this for years. I am usually fine reading along with notes. I have read and enjoyed The Divine Comedy using notes. As I always suspected and you have confirmed, this always seemed that it would be duller. Dante’s work was imaginative beyond belief.

    • ShereeKUWTP

      January 16, 2019 at 9:17 AM

      Yes, I remember you saying you enjoyed The Divine Comedy 🙂 The Pilgrim’s Progress would really be worth a go for you Brian, and I’d love to hear what you think of it!

  3. As long ago as that, wow that must be a difficult read

    • ShereeKUWTP

      January 17, 2019 at 10:09 AM

      Difficult in some ways, yeah – the huge chunks of text with no chapter breaks! ugh! – but not as much a slog as I would have thought! The character names definitely helped 😉

  4. I read Pilgrim’s Progress years ago in my teens, spurred by the influence of the March girls and some of L.M. Montgomery’s heroines too. And the fact of Bunyan writing it in prison gives it a bit of dramatic interest too. It’s been ages, but your review brings back memories. I love your example of Bunyan’s perhaps unintentional wit 😀

    • ShereeKUWTP

      January 18, 2019 at 3:57 PM

      Oh goodness, hats off to teenage Paula! I never would have slogged through something like PP when I was an adolescent! 😉

  5. Am reading it now. There appears to be a dearth of literature noting that the medievil fairs were early versions of shopping malls. Pilmgrim’s Progress has that covered. The language is nearly Elizabethan. If someone were told to go away, they would be directed to “Hie thee hence and thence be gone. Wend they way over wold and welkin hither thither and yon. When gloaming has come nie upon the crepuscular hour, and sol’s ray art become thin an won, then do get off my lawn.”

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